Ah yes, I’ve finally hit it, the point in the second draft of TOWOID that I dread in any long fic: the edits cascade.
It’s when you change one small but necessary scene at one point in the finished draft of a fic, which means you’ve gotta tweak the emotions or the events later to fall in line. Then the cascade begins, because all the dialogue has to thread a needle now and not be TOO inconsistent with the earlier stuff or the later stuff.
Luckily in TOWOID it didn’t hit until ch. 12 (in PTBS it happened in ch. 5 OUT OF 22. IT ADDED 40,000 WORDS TO THE FINAL DRAFT) and has so far only added a couple thousand words. It’s fine, like I think the chapter will be better as a result, but I am currently bashing my head against a solid stone wall until I can get all the words to tumble into the right order.